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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter and Zuko along with Katara are certainly in character as well. You also got Sokka/Toph as a pairing for your plot as well. Not a big Zutara or Tokka fan, but it looks like you have the makings of a interesting and good Avatar fic. Look forward towards your next update.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting idea you've come up with and nicely written. I was angry at Zuko's decision to team up with his sister at the end of the season. But, his guilt at the end gave me some hope that he'll make up for it. I love how you're having him react in this story. Poor Aang though.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its nice 2 know zuko has some honor.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is actually kinda cool.
Zuko: I like it.
Me; YEah me too. I hope you update soon. Later. K15
Zuko: I like it.
Me; YEah me too. I hope you update soon. Later. K15
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interasting
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! It's nice to see you writing again! Oooh, this is fuuuun. I like this story a lot :)
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an interesting idea you came up with this 'what if' plot. I read one avatar fic that is somewhat similar to this with Aang being Azula's prisoner, although that one was just a oneshot. Both Azula and Aang are certainly in character with your story. Look forward to see what happens in the next chapter.
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i know i should b really scare 4 aang w/ azula but should i also b scared 4 katara w/ zuko?
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good -update soon
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is done very well, and both of them are IC. Poor Aang. Update soon!