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I wonder what Zuko's got up his sleeve. Hmm, interesting.

There was one part that you seem to had push a little too far in the story. I thought the part where Azula tossed the water oasis bottle forcing Katara to catch it may have been pushing it. However, Azula's character usually is known to be bossy, a teaser, and usually being manipulative.

If you haven't work on your next chapter yet, you should probably work a little on Sokka and Toph or you could just go back to Azula and Aang again. I can say it many times, but this story is getting good.

I'm loving this so far! I can't wait for you to continue. I especially like the Zuko/Katara interaction.

Great update. This is one of the better Avatar sories I have ever read. Your characterization is perfect. Patiently awaiting the next chapter.

I like this chpater alot! I agree, it was to be zutara

Kataang shipper?! Really? I just can't see it... I thought it might be a "maturity thing" but we are close in age so... guess it really is just POV. Katara and Zuko are so yin/yang.... and they look much better together *wink* Plus I guess I fall for Zuko ... they have developed his character so well... deliciously complex and mmmmm... intense!

I am very much enjoying this so far. Excellent job. I also liked your Zuko Owner's Manual spoof. Hilarious! Read also that you are an x-LOTRer? I would be glad to forward a wacky kinda dark AU Legolas fic I did a while ago as payment for this awesome tale... and bribe for a happy ending? *hopeful grin*

On all accounts keep it up! Love it.

that's okay, change is good sometimes
Zuko: Agreed.
Me: I can't wait how to see the Sokka/Toph plays into this. It's actually getting good. Especially since I'm a hard core Zutara fan, but can stand Katara/Aang from time to time. Though Azula/Aang. That's a cool pairing too. I love your work. Keep the good stuff coming. Update soon. Later. K15

Interesting story! I like it. I hope to see more chapters soon. Lets see, nobody was out of charactor, plot seems steady, spelling and grammer are good, looks like you got yourself some quality fanfiction.

And I dont mind the short chapters if theyre updated frequently

Cy

how in the world does zuko plan on fixing it?

I like this story! And with all my favorite pairings too!!! Love it !!!!

Loved the Zutara chapter while the Azula stuff with Aang was just creepy. Poor Aang!! Let's hope Katara and Zuko can somehow save him or anyone save him for that matter, lol. Can't wait to read more Zutara goodness in the future! ^^