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June 19, 2023 at 12:00 AM
Hey idk If you'd remember me. But we used to roleplay back when you wrote this story.
I'm on discord now Mange7299
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait till you update.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. You should update it as soon as possible. I love these kinds of things. So please make more and update soon.
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but maybe you could use more descriptions. For example, you say that eliza said a lot of dirry things - why not just have her saying those things, and describe what it's like, what it looks like, what it feels like. Expand more on each of your scenes and this will be a top notch story.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not the biggest fan of rape stories, but this one has me curious as to where you're planning on going with it. Don't keep me waiting.