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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this i can't wait for more!
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would hate to see this fic left unfinished, please update
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awsomeness!
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well this is cute
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Things only mated Irkens got to do"? *SQUEAL* I can't wait for Dib to wake up! Don't give up on this fic, okay?
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
zomg u updated yay *dances like crazy*
ooh Zim dreaming of mating stuff XD
that would make an interesting intro to the next chapter :3
cant wait for ur next update ^-^
ooh Zim dreaming of mating stuff XD
that would make an interesting intro to the next chapter :3
cant wait for ur next update ^-^
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hurry and update. must see what happens
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>3< OMG! I love this story! And, funyn enough, there IS football player at my school like that guy. Heh, funny world huh. ANd I thought Zim's computer was a boy PX eh, oh well.
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurry I must know what happens!
-Does a little Zim stand.-
-Does a little Zim stand.-
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. Interesting story line but your vocab still needs a little work. Iunderstand about the hybrids but I'm not sure exactly what Laila (Fanchar?) was talking about. Also, she said that she would add ahealing solution to the 'toxin' which doesn't really follow, because a toxis in inherently dangerous. It's like saying you would add a healing solution to a poison.
Also, the Jock who likes Dib, he's a good character and could evolve a lot, however, his lines are a little unrealistic. That's one of the hardest parts about writing, so don't get down about it. It's just that, if you read his lines, no one really talks like that. Also, when you like osmeone and want to fuck them, usually stabbing is not the first thing a person goes for.
Looking forward to the next chapter
_hazel
Also, the Jock who likes Dib, he's a good character and could evolve a lot, however, his lines are a little unrealistic. That's one of the hardest parts about writing, so don't get down about it. It's just that, if you read his lines, no one really talks like that. Also, when you like osmeone and want to fuck them, usually stabbing is not the first thing a person goes for.
Looking forward to the next chapter
_hazel