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May 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please, tell me that you will continue....
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September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just found this gem while trawling for something to read. You, sir or madam, have a real gift for writing erotic scenes - the handjobs were extra hot, and that's hard to do. Further, despite the fact that Jonny and Jessie were going at it like rabbits, the scenes never felt repetitive (which could have easily been the case).
I'm pretty sure Jessie was my first cartoon crush (either her or Rogue from the X-Men Animated Series anyway), so it was great to read such a delicious erotic fic about her and Jonny. You wrote them really well, too - pretty much all of their dialogue and inner monologue fit right in w/ how they acted in the show, constantly dancing around the fact that they were totally perfect for one another, flirting and teasing and generally having great chemistry together. Race's dialogue was spot-on too; I could practically hear his voice actor in my mental ear with what you wrote.
Bravo on an excellent story. I hope you're still working on it, but even if not, it's still one of the best I've read on this site.
I'm pretty sure Jessie was my first cartoon crush (either her or Rogue from the X-Men Animated Series anyway), so it was great to read such a delicious erotic fic about her and Jonny. You wrote them really well, too - pretty much all of their dialogue and inner monologue fit right in w/ how they acted in the show, constantly dancing around the fact that they were totally perfect for one another, flirting and teasing and generally having great chemistry together. Race's dialogue was spot-on too; I could practically hear his voice actor in my mental ear with what you wrote.
Bravo on an excellent story. I hope you're still working on it, but even if not, it's still one of the best I've read on this site.
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September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much a i really hope that you continue to write it. Please say you will
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September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As always, your work is something to be aspired to. And I'm glad to see that your still alive. I hope this means that your going to update your other story as well. Please do.
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, I can't tell you how shocked I was that this story finally had an update and I am so overjoyed that it does! The chapter is just as good if not better than previous ones. You're on a creative role, keep going with it, and see this story through to the end. I would love to know how this ends. Great work and wonderful to read your stuff again!
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please tell you you will up date this!
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! This is the story that makes a guy wanna take a cold shower after reading almost every fuckin' chapter! If you haven't guessed, I more than liked this story. It is a Four alarm sizzling hot story! Pleeeeese keep this party going!
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING story can't wait for more rom harry102 seriously this was top notch, almost as good as love is strong. please for the love of god finish love is strong
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, you really need to update this!
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very, very hot. Extraordinary visualization skills, especially with the speech.