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July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
6/10 I think someone else said it already, but this IS rather silly. The "plot", I mean. Not just because it's paper thin, but it feels very rushed and you give little explanation. They just... have sex just like that! Speaking of which, the sex was decent. Personally, I think you just write pure smut- forget about trying to construct some kind of story behind it.
Overall, your Mandy/Pheobe story was better.
And the title "Totally Incest!" is totally funny!
Overall, your Mandy/Pheobe story was better.
And the title "Totally Incest!" is totally funny!
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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice thing you did!
I hope to see if you can do it with Clover or Sam
I hope to see if you can do it with Clover or Sam
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no offense...i mean u give it a good try...but it kinda seems silly to me...