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for Lord of the Pompons

by Golding

schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, this is very interesting and I want to see more. Are you planning on having Kim, Tara, Bonnie and the other cheerleaders be in a harem with Ron, or are you planning on doing something different?
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story i hope you write more on it
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sounds good need more
person modoken
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed it, will it ever be updated again though?
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is really good. I hope to see the next chapter real soon
person pbow320
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first two chapters of 'Lord of the Pompons' and can't wait to read more. Jope you post soon.

Live Large,

pbow
person GREAT PACE
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not to long not to short great lead up... a bit OOC but i'll let that slide seeing as they are thinking most of it.

Oh and finnally a story that doesent mention shego and kim being lovers, i love yuri but not that pairing.
person pwnage
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE
person Star of Morning
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story demands an update, and a juicy one. Please keep writting, this is getting so interesting.
person BlueGriffon
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lord of the Flies? I hope you don't have the cheerleaders use him as a sacrifice...

Other than the feeling of impending doom (where Ron's concerned) this looks to shaping up rather nicely, good grammar and spelling overall and despite the fact that so far the plot's familiar it still maintains interest, keep it up.