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for Exodus

by PinkSpider

schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Toph/Zuko??? I have to say, I'm rather excited. I've been waiting ages for that pairing. ahem...
None of the character are entirely occ...yet, and the story can be followed easily. No spelling or gammarical errors that have made me gringe so far. Please keep up the good work!
person Clairei
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I'd love to read the rest of this story! :D I haven't seen any Zuko x Toph fic around this site, so I want to see how you develope your story. It's very well written and I liked how you portrayed the action sequences. Please, continue.
person corncurlz
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gret story i hope you continue......and soon
person Eek
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh, I wish I was a lesbian and not a hetero!

Toko... Zuph... Tuko... Zoph... Tophuko! Tophu... Tofu!

Lol, tofu...
person Ebil
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD, make it a Xin Fu/Toph fic! XD
person killer200
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that story was great. and though i am a male, i do prefer hetro
person ion twister
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please make it a toph/sokka
person M
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Someone can fuck Toph blind! :D How old is she supposed to be in this anyway?
person snakeskin joe
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can you please make it a sokka/toph.