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for Mistakes Corrected

by SSJ04Mewtwo

schedule November 17, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Honestly I started reading out of curiosity but I loved it, I hope you continue writing it. 

schedule November 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loved this!
is there gonna be more?
schedule February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This MIGHT be a good story, I don't know because the walls of text make it next to impossible to read. Please reformat with a line between every paragraph please? It's really hard to follow. What little I was able to read also seemed to favor present tense, you might want to consider changing that.

Great effort though. Keep writing. ♥
person Lady Delilah
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: Weekend of Lust and Standardized Stress

Hey there, sorry I haven't been quicker in posting my reviews. My laptop suffered a terrible accident and I was reading your stories via my PSP *groans softly*. Anyways, I just wanted to say thank you for the updates; I just can't get enough of your stories, they're so enjoyable. I love the plots, the way you flesh out the characters, the interesting and unique ways you write their romances, and the humor you bring to them.


All the best,

Lady Delilah
person Lady Delilah
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story almost as much as "Much to Do About Spiral", and like the former mentioned story I'd love to see this one continued. Maybe Jane could find out--from Daria and Trent. Maybe Jane and Jesse could have a chapter and then the two girls could siit in on a brainstorming session for new music for the Spiral. Daria and Trent dropping lyrics while Jane and Jesse come up with some musical beats. Irregardless, you've got me hooked on both stories and I'd love to see more of either or both--if you've got the time and desire to write more that is--I'm not pushing, just dropping suggestions (as asked).

With warmest regards,

Lady Delilah
xo
person Minkychanz
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA!

I loved the end. Friggin Tom.

XD I was surprised that there was no condom though. lol

You should add to the story....but no pregnancy please : o