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for The Neutron/Vortex Conundrum

by Jayrich

schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update please!
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. It's one of the large genre that takes the humour from the series and combines it with a porno. However, this story does it WELL. 5 out of 5 only because I can't give it a 10 out of 5.
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's so funny and good, but please...please...please update!! i want to finish it
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. It's probably one of the best I read so far.
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter too. Keep it up. And I hope theres another chapter too.
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! He'll finally realize that he loves her...awww!
person RAW19
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
most excellent!
person LoviLovely
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw...........nice story
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
strange, but entertaining. I like it. update soon.
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Update it soon!