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for Mama's boy

by Hornydude75

schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap! You started good in the first chapter then your second one was like you reverted back to first grade literature. You had a lot of mistakes in the second chapter but the first one was good.
person Quondam
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cmon man what the hell? Wasn't even a story.