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by Spleef

person Trisha Feather
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as ever, I have now read Slow Heat, Kiss of Fire, and Valcano. I am looking forward to reading Cold Fire and Hot Water. Your sotries are amazing and how much effort you seem to put into them are just mind blowing. I wish I would have found these stories earlier.
person Belle
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh the drama, lol what a good chapter. loved how you were in aangs head and how it did feel like a 12 year olds thought processes. loved everything, especially the exchange between aang and zuko and aangs dreams. you are so creative and SUCH a talented author!!
person Allie
schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say what a great story this is! I love how realistically you've developed it, versus just having Katara and Zuko leap into each others arms and live happily ever after.
person Karine
schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi there i have been reading you story and i really like it ^_^ i admit i was just bored and clicked on a fanfic that sounded interesting considering i have read your other works, but it sounded like something to pass the time. instead i got this amazing story i really got captivated by it. what started out at midnight as just a couple of chatpers then go to bed was nothing like i expected. now here i am at chapter 19 and it being 7:22am the next morning ^_^ i just can't stop. i tell myself one more chapter then bed but after reading it, i ended up reading more next thing you know i spent the whole night reading your story. I can see from clicking ahead that you are already up to chapter 41 on this story and it makes me happy i didn't start earlier cause i'm sure the antisapation would have killing me ^_^ i kept reading how you wrote on how people would read it but not comment and how you where thinking of not continuing this story it scared me a bit cause i was so rapped up in this story the thought of you not continuing it hadent ocured to me.-_- i'm just glad it went to chapter 41 as far as i can see. i was gonna wait to review till i got all caught up to your more recent chapter but seeing your constant notes on wanting a review i just had to comply.^_^ i hope that you continue this story and i can't wait to see how everthing turns out. i enjoy how zuko and katara's relationship finally started and now i just can't wait to see how it will all playout. i read about how you said you would spice things up on like not making there realationship all happy flowers and such after just that one meeting and that really got me interested on how much more you are doing with this story.i can't wait to read more i will be sure to review again.

Your sleep deprived fan ^_^ karine
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story...stayed up until 5am reading. And huge love for leaving both a happy and tragic ending...I dunno if I just like broody Zuko or what but I liked the tragic ending better. Can't wait till I get out of work to read the sequel!
person Melanie
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
exactly why you have become one of my favorite authors:

I lovingly rubbed her hair and back dry with a towel when we were done, and she returned the favor, teasing me by rumpling my hair with the towel. It was almost morning and we were tired, so there'd be no loveplay. But I was happy to share this night with her, and relax like this. Who said love had to always be on the physical level? I was happy to just be with her.
person Melanie
schedule August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your fanfic Slow Heat. I love your writing style and how you stay so true to the characters personalities. I especially want to praise your creativity with Chit Sangs story and his mother. You are very talented, and I look forward to reading your other works after finishing this one!
person bunny
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok i really like slow heat.... but after i finished this i am kinda curios to se what Hot water, Kiss of Fire, and volcano edning is gonna be. ....... still waiting on.
person Jezabelle
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. I appreciated that Zuko and Katara weren't all "I love you" "I love you more" at the beginning. The realism, though dark sometimes (Hamma, freaky freaky) was great. Not a huge fan of the original ending, but hey, you can't be happy all the time. I'm going to read more of your work, definitely.
person Tenohsei
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't review stories that I read here but I just had to review this story. I loved Slow Heat! I especially loved the Alternative Ending! It just seemed to fit the series better what with Katara's predicted future given to her and all. Not to mention I'm a sucker for a happy ending.

As a fellow writer I also wanted to give you some advice. Ignore those who flame the story. I noticed you mentioned that you got several mean and critical reviews. You really should just ignore anything that isn't a constructive. As I writer I write for myself first and so should you. You are a good writer and as long as you are happy with what you write then it doesn't matter what anyone else thinks.