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for Slow Heat

by Spleef

person Lessa169
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*pats Spleef on the back* I'm here and I'm reading this. I'm interested in seeing where you go with this. The slow build is killing me and I'm popping onto the front page all the time to see if you've updated this.

Keep up the hard work. It is appreciated.
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
took me a little bit to log in but I got it! Good chapter, keep up the good work! and update soon!
person ivorycoral
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Waited for this last chapter for quite awhile, and I gotta tell you, it was freaking worth the wait! By all that is good and right KEEP WRITING!
person DazedandConfused
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn.
person asdfghjkl
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovin' it still! :D
person LadyCobain
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I definitely like this ending much better than the Season Finale! When is the 3rd season even supposed to start?...Anywho, loverly story! Keep it goin'!
person mel
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your ending better than the one I watched. I think you made a good decision to change the storyline. I really like what you've written and I can't wait til the next chapter.
person J
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh that was so good, I'm begging you to update this soon! it would be a very nice christmas present!!!
person Mimiru
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Personally I hope that Zuko thoughts were simular to the ones that you wrote in the 6th chapter during the season 2 finale. I find it a little hard to believe that he would just turn on everyone for no apparent reason. I just hope he actually does have an ultirior motive other than getting the crown from his sister, hopefully I'm not reading into this too far. But a great story either way and I look forward to other updates. Ciao
person morwen re
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! another chapter! good job, even if i am a little confused. i can't wait to see the next chapter!