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for Slow Heat

by Spleef

person Private Persons
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this on my lunch hour and do not want to stop so update.
person OrangePeelings
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey you do good work, keep it flowing just like you are.
person Allure
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As always you do awesome work I love your writing!
person Mackrel
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is always good to read a piece that has a plot and is well written. Continue Please
person ivorycoral
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated, and the land is happy again! Good chapter from start to finish. So, what' happens next? This story is going really well, so by all means keep it up. In all honestly, I don't have any suggestions for improvement... IT'S THAT GOOD! So like I say, keep it up.
Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses,
ivorycoral
person Anon
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was smart of Iroh. And it's about time you fucking updated, lol
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I much prefer your version to the season finale. Keep up the good work! :-p
person Jasmin Kaiba
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go Katara!
Great story!I simply love it!Well it is somewhat disturbing to know that Katara's going to die...
Anyway, this is just great,keep it up!
Please update soon!
Bye,take care,
Jasmin
person Tabris
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very not bad. im hung on what Zuko has to say to earn back katara's trust. i hope this story isnt over and i am very much anticipating na update. untill then. keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would have reviewed earlier but they went and changed it. This story is really getting exciting I can't wait to see where you go with Zuko's appearance with Katara.