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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i feel really bad now for not reviewing. i love your stories, you have great style and you use correct grammar which really impresses me. i'll try to make it a habit again to review every story i read.
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I never get tired of rereading this story. I'm looking forward to getting Katara over this no talking hump. Girlfriend needs to notice the lad.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more, Spleef! You've done an excellent job, and I just LOVE it!! Friction is nice...er..in a story!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah. Your fic is such a wonderful relief. When there's no new Avatar eps on, I get antsy, and I read fanfics. It's usually a mistake made out of desperation. But what you have here, is an actual story. Nobody's out of character, or generally retarded, you have varied sentence structure and word choice...It makes me so happy. Oh, and can I just say that their scuffle when Zuko finds out Aang is alive is the best Zutara fight scene I've ever read? Ok, constructive stuff: I had trouble realizing they'd gotten on a boat, might want to make that clearer somehow. Um...yeah, that's all I can think of for now. Since you need the stroking to continue, stroke-stroke-stroke. I'm gonna check out Kiss of Fire next. Later champ!
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that Zuko and Katara... When will they make up and just bang already XD
Another good chapter from you, update soon and continue your good work! ^-^
Another good chapter from you, update soon and continue your good work! ^-^
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY to see you back and updating!
Oh how long will you torture us with these two! Great chapter waiting for more.
Oh how long will you torture us with these two! Great chapter waiting for more.
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yea I realy love this story and am quite enjoying it. I didn't think of how Aang's long sleeves would be hot, nice detail there. Poor Zuko being left alone like that, I just want to give him a big squeeze. I also liked the details that Zuko was noticing the ice in the drink. Your vocab and spaincing are well done and the pacing flows very well. I'm so happy to be able to read an update to this story, I really love this pairing.
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read all of your stories over time and have never left a review. It is not that I don't love them because I do. It is the fact that I don't have much time when I get on the site before something pulls me away and I never get back to it for days sometimes weeks.
I am telling you this to say that I LOVE your writing and I do hope that you continue because I WOULD REALLY miss reading them if stopped.
I am telling you this to say that I LOVE your writing and I do hope that you continue because I WOULD REALLY miss reading them if stopped.
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say that your stories are the best zutara stories I have ever read (and I do a lot of reading--teaching in a small town in france leaves me with a lot of time on my hands)! I am newish to the fandom, but with great writers like you out there I know I will be sticking around for a long time!
liz
liz
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you have finaly updated this story. It really sucks that there are lazy people in the world that refuse to take two to five minutes out of their lives and write a good review. Even just 'Hey, nice work.' is good. But I also think that you shouldnt stop your stories just because of these people. There are people who love your work and it would be a shame if you stopped producing your magnificent stories. All of your work has been a blast to read and I hope that you continue to keep people on the edge of thier seat waiting for the next chapter. I really want you to update soon and dont give up because of the morons of the world!