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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
K, you know what? Since I can't seem to stop putting my foot in my mouth I'm just gonna go with it. Every time you use the word "wench" I DIE A LITTLE INSIDE. This is not set in 14th century England. Once again I do in fact like your story and wish you to continue.
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry bout the lack of reviews! Excellent chapter; glad to see Z & K aren't fighting as much. Hope more people review your awesome story! :-)
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes I know that I am lazy and inconsiderate for not thinking the author might want or need deeback on their work. Do not stop writing because of it.I 'll try to get better because I love your work.
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You had the Painted Lady and the Blue Spirit meet.... I LOVE YOU! I have always wanted to see these two alter egos meet and you did it in such a great fashion. Your solution to the lake's pollution was very smart and really what they should have done in the begining, your insight was very good. And the closeness was smexy, I enjoyed Zuko checking her out all pretty and painted.
I'm dying to see Sokka and Zuko swoard train shirtless....yes...drool...*slurp* ok please?
I adore all of your work, and I'm really loving this story. Thank you so much for giving us the gift of your words and talent, I'm really happy every time I see an update from you.
I'm dying to see Sokka and Zuko swoard train shirtless....yes...drool...*slurp* ok please?
I adore all of your work, and I'm really loving this story. Thank you so much for giving us the gift of your words and talent, I'm really happy every time I see an update from you.
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent as always ohh katara has a stubbon side i like it...
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, what can I say I've been doing it backwards since I applied for membership. I probably should read other stories first then post my own story. I tend to get busy and forget about alot of things, including reviewing and writing.
Yes I read your stuff and it is one of my fav's. I can not promise to be a regular reviewer because the rarness of my computer use but I promise I will try to reward you and other authors for their work at providing us enjoyment. Stone2fire
Yes I read your stuff and it is one of my fav's. I can not promise to be a regular reviewer because the rarness of my computer use but I promise I will try to reward you and other authors for their work at providing us enjoyment. Stone2fire
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are such a great story teller and it is such a shame that people dont put in the time to give you a nice word or two. Some people just dont realize that being an author can be stressful, especialy when a lot of time and effort is put into writing the stories.
That being said, I think your Zutara stories are top notch. I always love to read your stories and they make me laugh, frown, get anxious and other emotions that the characters feel.
That being said, I think your Zutara stories are top notch. I always love to read your stories and they make me laugh, frown, get anxious and other emotions that the characters feel.
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Always a fan of your work and always will be. Keep it coming you know we love you we are just lazy sometimes that's all. Coreena
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey! thanks for updating! i love your stories!
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to now be reveiwing your fics on this site instead of ffnet. My screen name there was Brittzy, just to clarify who I am and make sure you didn't think you lost a reviewer. Personally, I don't really care for that site. But unlike this one, which I prefer, it sends me alerts when a new story is posted.
I was unaware you did not post mature stories on ffnet. Sorry. I know I should have looked before saying anything about smut. *blushes*
Also I hope I didn't offend you by saying you didn't update because of the lack of episodes. I know that you are an amazing author and don't need to follow any of the season plot line, I just wondered if that was the case since there were some similarities between the fic and season three. So, I applogize if I implied something you didn't like.
OKay, now that all that's said and done. This chapter was quite entertaining. It was nice to see Zuko realize the destruction the Fire Nation and his father have caused to their very own people. More and more it seems he is coming out of the "Fire Nation is absolute greatness" state of mind. It was also refreshing to see Katara and Zuko working together to help the poor defenseless people of his nation. I'm glad they are seeing that they can work together by putting their petty differences aside. A part of me would love Katara to just forgive and forget right now. But, that wouldn't be very much fun, or much of a story now would it ^_^ I just luff angst! It makes for great smut in the end. ~_^
Yeah yeah always thinking about those raunchy scenes. *sigh*
It's very disappionting to see that readers are not reviewing. Anyone can see that you work hard at what you do. Everytime a new chapter is posted it's always well written, the grammar and spelling are up to par, and the chapter flows beautifully. There is nothing I hate more than trying to read a fic that looks like it was slopped together in 5 seconds. If the author doesn't care enough about the appearence of their fic then why should I give two shits enough to take my time and read it. It's a personal rule I have that I review each and every story I read. I figure if the authors take enough time to write it and care about it at least I can show tbem their work is not in vain. Though I think all the authors in the Naruto and Inuyasha section hate me.. sometimes I aint so nice... heh.
I truly do hope that more people review for this story. It would be a shame if it was never finished.
SO COME ON PEOPLE PLEEEEEEEASE REVIEW! GIVE HER SOME DAMN FEEDBACK.
I was unaware you did not post mature stories on ffnet. Sorry. I know I should have looked before saying anything about smut. *blushes*
Also I hope I didn't offend you by saying you didn't update because of the lack of episodes. I know that you are an amazing author and don't need to follow any of the season plot line, I just wondered if that was the case since there were some similarities between the fic and season three. So, I applogize if I implied something you didn't like.
OKay, now that all that's said and done. This chapter was quite entertaining. It was nice to see Zuko realize the destruction the Fire Nation and his father have caused to their very own people. More and more it seems he is coming out of the "Fire Nation is absolute greatness" state of mind. It was also refreshing to see Katara and Zuko working together to help the poor defenseless people of his nation. I'm glad they are seeing that they can work together by putting their petty differences aside. A part of me would love Katara to just forgive and forget right now. But, that wouldn't be very much fun, or much of a story now would it ^_^ I just luff angst! It makes for great smut in the end. ~_^
Yeah yeah always thinking about those raunchy scenes. *sigh*
It's very disappionting to see that readers are not reviewing. Anyone can see that you work hard at what you do. Everytime a new chapter is posted it's always well written, the grammar and spelling are up to par, and the chapter flows beautifully. There is nothing I hate more than trying to read a fic that looks like it was slopped together in 5 seconds. If the author doesn't care enough about the appearence of their fic then why should I give two shits enough to take my time and read it. It's a personal rule I have that I review each and every story I read. I figure if the authors take enough time to write it and care about it at least I can show tbem their work is not in vain. Though I think all the authors in the Naruto and Inuyasha section hate me.. sometimes I aint so nice... heh.
I truly do hope that more people review for this story. It would be a shame if it was never finished.
SO COME ON PEOPLE PLEEEEEEEASE REVIEW! GIVE HER SOME DAMN FEEDBACK.