rate_review Reviews

I love, love, love this story! I was very happy to see it updated. I liked Zuko's thoughts on 'rise with the sun' that was so great. MMm so ZuZu is being a naughty boy, very nice. And a big thank you for giving me the shirtless Sokka/Zuko sword fight that I wanted. If I could see this in the anime I would die a happy woman. I like how you're shaping everyone up, and Zuko's practical nagging is sweet.

I'm still liking earnst/angsty/aroused Zuko, very nice and you're doing a cool job having Katara's hormones betray her. The small niceties like giving them both water is sweet.

I absolutely love this story! Im sorry I haven't reviewed until now. But, seeing as they are of extreme importance to you (good thing btw) i shall be doing it more. keep up the good work spleef! you are a very talented author

I absolutely love this story! Im sorry I haven't reviewed until now. But, seeing as they are of extreme importance to you (good thing btw) i shall be doing it more. keep up the good work spleef! you are a very talented author.

Things are starting to heat up. I am really enjoying this. :)

things are heating up! good job!

The tension builds...and isn't it soooo good. I love the intricate dance that you have Katara and Zuko in, and how they, just like they should be at their age, are conflicted about their feelings and reactions. Fantastic job.

I am a fan of the tv show, and I usually don't like fanfiction when it deviates from the plot line in the show, but I am really enjoying reading this story! Your writing is descriptive and engaging. Keep up the good work!

Aagh! Forced... to... review!!!

I like this story. I like how it follows the storyline so far. Really awesome!! I want to read the rest ::begs:: PLEASE!!!

Ahh... Even with the unexpected twist that was Zuko turning back to the fire side to help Azula, this is exactly what I wished the canon would have done. (Granted I have a Zutara bias, but oh well.)

Overall I have to say it's very interesting read. Granted, I'm not the biggest fan of first person perspective, but for the most part the transitions flow fairly straight-forwardly, even if there is a little choppy-ness at times. The character POV labels help mucho big time. On the flip side, I especially like how you're taking the the time to touch slightly on the original episodes with the AR tweak - stealing fire nation garb, the Painted Lady, and such.

I'll be curious to see how else you play with things. Keep up the good work!

More More More!... Lorve it... cant wait for them to hook up with all the building tension inside... itll cause one h*ll of an explosion. :)