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for Slow Heat

by Spleef

person ray
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. i thought the real episode was intense enough
but wow. it was amazing.
person Mira
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please continue~! i love the story~!
person Mira
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh and can i add something? the way-too-big spaces are kinda irritating. is there something wrong with the spacing itself or do i have to adjust something? thanks! please do continue~!
person What the...
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yo, nice story, creative, imaginative and fairly well written...now, that a side, YOU MADE ZUKO INTO A TOTAL BITCH
person What the...
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, I hate the way you portray zuko in this...but I can't stop reading.
person Kim
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Keep Up the good work! Hurry up and update this is getting good!
person Ishi the Earthmover
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! A Zuko-with-the-GAang-fic that's actually in-character and well-written. :D

I eagerly await more chapters!
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well i'm glad you're continuing with this. It's a good story, and Katara and Zuko are coming to head i see. I like the new chapter and hope you'll update soon. But please, please don't continue with this look on reviews. Everyone likes reviews, who doesn't, but you can't guarantee that you'll always get them. And if you stop writing the story, then what about the people who have reviewed? Are they not good enough to continue the story for? Are they just irrelivant until you get enough reviews so you can continue? And how many reviews does it take for you to keep going?

You might not be getting reviews because people are busy and haven't gotten to it yet, or they could have had somthing come up and forgotten to go back and do it, or they're simply lazy. People have lives outside of fanfiction, as i'm sure you have yourself and i'm sure you know this. Keep going anyway, and good luck with whatever reviews you do get that you deem worthy enough for the next chapter.

Wolf
person Spleef Addict
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are what keep me sane during these Avatarless monthes, I was wondering if you were going to incorperate Katara's bloodbending though....Cause it would be funny for her to mess around with Zuko lol.
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Write more please! :)