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for Slow Heat

by Spleef

person Joshua
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. ONe of the best zutaras yet. I love your stories and i hope you update soon. Very good. Please keep it up!!!
person Kayla
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw poor Zuko
just when everything was going well for him
I love your story
Can't wait till the next chapter!

Kayla
person Lunar84
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as usual. Beautifully written. I would expect nothing less.

Too bad Katara is going to be a dumbass now.
person Broken Avenger21
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I can't wait for the next chapter!!~!
person Cody
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing!!!! wow
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! This is sooooooooo effing HAWT!!!! More Please! Youre the best!
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. katara!?! are you insane. giving up hot sex!?!
can't wait to see what happens next

schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you took my suggestion about reaching for her hand in the argument. This is my favorite chapter so far and me wants moarrr!
person Anon.
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy, happy, joy, joy, happy, happy, joy, joy. (insert Rin and Stimpy happy dance)

This was worth the wait damn that left me a-tremble, ok things I loved.

This line was freaking awesome I ached to share it with her, show her what kind of effect she had on me.
I like the teenaged way he was tring to get her attention.
Love that this time she's bitting him and marking him up.
That he would apoligies for insulting her in the middle was sweet and tender.
Rutting is a great word, fantastic vocab.
'You could be everything' just killed me, gawds that was amazing.

And the ending nooooo! Ok I love this so freaking much big hugs and high fives all around, this was awe inspiring.