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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to add to my previous review that I love the sexy smexy reconciliations in your stories. Can't wait for this one.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the spinoff u did on season 2 and season 3
its really interesting
and u really kept to character on zuko
not many people do that
its really interesting
and u really kept to character on zuko
not many people do that
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aawww!!!! This was sweet... I love the conversation through the door, with their backs against the wall. When you don't see the other's face, you can afford vulnerability and honesty. Keep updating!
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lurve it! Now that the conflict is done... more smut, waffy hot smut... pweeeeeeeeees
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh and did I forget to mention that this was totally hawt! I love the mentions of Iroh courting, that was very cute and sweet.
The thinking while in slime was funny and I liked the fire lilly.
The thinking while in slime was funny and I liked the fire lilly.
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a great way to end the chapter. I really wished that the Avatar team had you as one of their writers. Maybe the outcome would've been much better than it was (not that the finale was bad, but it was lacking...) I really like how you make sure to express each person's feelings thoroughly and with a lot of thought behind their words. I feel this is what truly brings a character to life, and this is the true art of writing, succeeding to make the reader feel what the character is feeling, and you did just that. Thank you for sharing your fanfics with us. It has really brought me out of my Avatar depression.
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww this was so cute, I'm loving how you're developing this story. I really like the realisim that this is awkward and unsure. That's so sweet and cute, and I like the pacing and flow.
You're doing a great job switching between their prespectives and bringing in the different backgrounds. It would make sense that the Water tribe with the 'betrothal' practices that Katara would be feeling very gulity about her people's traditions and Zuko would have a very different view.
I really adore this story and you're my cannon. Thank you for updating so quickly!
You're doing a great job switching between their prespectives and bringing in the different backgrounds. It would make sense that the Water tribe with the 'betrothal' practices that Katara would be feeling very gulity about her people's traditions and Zuko would have a very different view.
I really adore this story and you're my cannon. Thank you for updating so quickly!
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG MORE!!!! you had to leave it that didn't you spleef -_-. Jk. I love this story and Can't wait for the next chapter. <3
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I never get tired of rereading this story. Your Zutara fics are my cannon. I'm so happy that I can revisit them so often. Thank you so much for putting so much time and energy and care into this art and bring me so much pleasure.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT Story. Can't wait to start reading the sequel to this. Hope you update this one soon. Great job.