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for Slow Heat

by Spleef

schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness I knew this chapter was coming, but still OH MY GOODNESS!!! I feel SO bad for Zuko!!!! I just want to give him a hug! Anyway, thank you again for your writing & I CANNOT Wait to read more!! Love This Story!!!
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schedule July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
... Meh...
person Maleeha Ali
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Katara's dead? :((( Is this story complete? Omg, I'm so devastated! You can't kill her off (albeit, you can but nooooooo her and Zuko are meant to be together forever with her ruling by his side) I've never felt so affected :(
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"There were men from the Fire Nation who felt that their lines had become too unbalanced with an excessive amount of fire...” I could not help but think of Ozai and Azula, as well as Sozin, as Uncle went on, “and they would travel to Water lands and {kidnap} Water Tribe women to be their wives, to balance out their lines. The tales are that when such children were successfully conceived and born, they were very skilled and strong in whatever element they had gained from their parents".

moral of the story-Kidnapping= romance and with the added prize of badass children.

jk lol, love the story but that part just had me going...'huh? probably not the best way to make a point iroh lol' more please.



schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this last part! What a perfect segue into when Aang leaves in the dead of night at the beginning of the season finale!! Love it! Can't wait to read more!! Thanks again for the update!
person Ryoko
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you update quick. Even though, you don't know me, this makes me love you even more! <333
"trying to eat her face"! XD Ahaha! So like Aang! Love the symbolic dream that he had. Totally made sense that he had them.
person Ryoko
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw man. My review didn't go in all the way. I just wanted to say that I liked how Aang compared their kisses to 'eating' face and the symbolic dreams he had. That so would happen to Aang, if he were especially paranoid of the two. Glad that Sokka is understanding about Zuko and Katara's relationship. Yeah, I think he would be too, after his life changing adventure with him. Zuko and Katara is such a great match and you portray them beautifully. Lol, again, I must request you to please continue.
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love that last line that you had Aang say! Brilliant XD
I loved this chapter it was sweet & cute & I greatly enjoyed it :) Thanks for the update! It makes my day when this story gets updated! Thabk you for writing this wondrful story! I can't wait to see how it all plays out!!
person Ryoko
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Again, you never cease to amaze me in your writing! Love. Love. LOVE this story! Everyone's spot on! Especially Zuko; ESPECIALLY Aang. ;) I urge you to continue, my friend. OH and the sex was out of this world!
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your creative spin on The Ember Island Players. I didn't give that episode much thought the first time I saw ATLA. But going back there were many plot holes I wondered about and you touched on all of them. You are an excellent observer :) & again I greatly enjoyed this chapter, especially the first half of it. I am currently reading through your Kiss of Fire story & I loved the plot twist that ties both stories together with the marks that Katara & Zuko give one another as mates for life. It was a joy to read & I can't wait for the next update!!! This is my all time favorite Zutara story!! :D