rate_review Reviews

Hello there! I just stumbled upon this story on your last update, and I must say, I love it! Oh, the plot you're developing is so well written, as are your characters. It's not often you see an author that can actually keep their subjects in character whilst having them do things that are completely out of.
I truly enjoy reading your work and I hope you're able to update this story again very soon. But, please, no rushing! Such talent takes time, of this I am sure.
Thanks for submitting such wondrous work,
Laraine

I really do love the way you stick to the bones of the original story while making it your own. This is hands down the best Avatar stories I've ever read! I can't wait to look at the others you've written. If they're all of this caliber I know I'm going to love them. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for an update!

I enjoy rereading this story.

I very much like how you had Zhao be the one to kill Kaya, very nice. And the first thing that I thought when I saw that episode was that someone in that small village sold out Katara's family. I very much liked your Puppetmaster as well. One of the things that I'm enjoying so much about this series is that you are healing the wounds left by my disatifaction in the last season. You're making this a richer more mature and realistic story and I am seeing your story in my head like it was the true ending.

Lemme tell you how much I love this line “How'd you like to stick it to the Fire Lord and bring peace to the world?” I adore how you write Sokka. And Poppy is a wonderfull fire nation name I liked it.

Every time I read your stories your writing skills seem to get better, keep it up

Another amazing chapter! The tension is slowly building! I can't wait to see what happens next ^-^

aaahhhh! the anticipation is killing me! but I really enjoyed this last chapter. I'm glad Chit Sang joined the cause...

I love how you're taking this story. And the whole Saffire Lee thing is so cute. Love Wang Fire, very nice to get a shout out to the rest of the Gaang. The ice play was very smexy I loved it.

I think what you did for Chit Sang's backstory was fantastic. I thought it was kinda weird that his eyes were blue and that they never explained his crime or shit.

Thanks for updating! I love your stories!!!! ^_^