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ZUTARA HAS NINJAS WHAT NOW BITCH!!! :D!! Another amazing chapter spleef I can't wait till you get to the southern raiders :D!!!

Whoo hoo sexy ninja's yea! I'm amazed at how fast you're putting these chapters out, you're really spoiling us. I laughed about the fund raising party, very nice sequel to the beach. I can't wait for next installment. Oh and I laughed at Katara 'seeing' that Zuko had to pee, very funny.

I absolutley LOVE this story it is honestly one of the best I have ever read so keep on writing

I like it, I love it, I want more of it. The scene with Aang cuddling up to Zuko was very funny. And I like how you put in the hints of Haru's crush on Katara. The discription of the Island and food was lovely.

I'm happiest of all about the alternate ending! Yes, I love Kiss of Fire, but I enjoyed both the Hot Water and Volcano stories and I know I will enjoy this as well.

Thank you for updating so quickly!! This was a real treat and I am happy for it. It's sad to think this story is almost over.

yes YES!! alternate ending!
though i love a good tale noir, i also like alternatives! volcano was great, so i'd love to see what you come up with for this! keep it up mistress ;)

Thank you so much for updating! I hope your next update is a lot sooner. I can't get enough of Slow Heat. I've anxious for Kiss of Fire. I know you said you are almost done with both stories. What's next in your collection of Avatar? I hope this isn't the end of your Avatar writing.

Hi there! I was thinking you might have fallen off the face of the earth and I'm very glad this is not the case. I have read Kiss of Fire and I saw you had updated Slow Heat and decided I ought to read this story too. I really love your writing. I couldn't put this story away. I love your own spin on the show and I completely agree that the show was lacking in many aspects. I also like your development of Chit Sang's character, I like the idea of him having a back story. It's intriguing :)

I can't wait for you to update Kiss of Fire and Slow Heat. My roommate and I are reading Kiss of Fire. As for an alternative ending for Slow Heat, I think that because we know Slow Heat will be sad you can leave it that way. Or you can consider making it sad but inspiring hope? Like talk about how she will end up reincarnated? Just a thought :-P

Anyway, I can't wait for the next update. Please keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Great chapter! I'm looking forward to more! :-)

it's so great to see an update!
i quite enjoyed the chapter, though it seemed like it moved through the plot rather quickly. But in a good way. almost like getting the business out of the way to make room for the character details ;). there was one slip up in tense near the beginning (water massage zutara scene), but other than that, perfect!
keep it up, and as always, more more more!!