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for Slow Heat

by Spleef

person fhksfjsakjf
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooo I can't wait!! But You should have made Zuko kick the avatar's ass or Katara should have gotten pissed at him!! Well hurry and update Please!!!!
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I never realized how many inconsistencies there were in the TV ep of the play... nobody in-universe would have known that much about the Aang Gang. Fascinating. And well-done! (for you, not them)
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! What a wonderful story. I especially like that their love takes time. I have read way too many Zutara stories where its two paragraphs in and they're both like "OMG I love you so much- I have since the first time I saw you!!" Its refreshing to read a slow-growing love.

I'm sorry many readers have not been reviewing.
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww the ending made my go all mushy. I liked the small physcial details like the hair fliping, in keeping the charaters very well in form. I love your work and always squee when I see any new update. Thank you very much for making me smile so much:)
person D
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and the interaction between the two. I hope you keep writing!
person Danielle
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really really enjoy reading Slow Heat and Kiss of Fire! These are the best Zutara fanfictions I've had the pleasure of coming across ever since I discovered the shipping between the two benders. Although the stories aren't complete yet, I still find myself going back and reading them from the beginning up to where they leave off and I never tire of them. The time you take to go over every detail is impeccable and your research of historical events and society of Asian culture is refreshing and breathes extra life into the stories. I applaude you for taking the time out of your schedule to write and share for others to enjoy. I eagerly look forward to reading the upcoming chapters!
person cookie
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love how they just layed there all night.
keep it up!

save some steamy scenes for the future as well :)
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! that was great! i love the mushy bits as much as the smut. it adds so much. the simple 'everyday' things they share, but the declaration was great. oh boy, i can't wait for more. i have a feeling you're going to make me cry in one of these chapters ;)
person Erica
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEAY!!! He finally said it!!!! This is my favorite story of yours! Your an amazing writer. Update this one soon please!!
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A bit short, but with the awesome ending, i can't complain. HE FINALLY SAID IT! YEAH!