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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kamas! He is one of my favorite characters in you're stories! Fantastic job!
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhhh we're getting into the home streach! Nice inner monolog on Aang's thoughts and how he thought Zuko was 'eating her face off' was funny. I think Sokka and Zuko would be great inlaws and the breakup/reveal scene was sensitive and balanced. I'm enjoying this story very much.
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is awsome i've been upi all night since I found this story like right now it's 12:23. So yeah I like it, Im not a fan of the adding of Chit Sang but hay besides that it's a awsome story so far (Im on Chapter 25 when writeing this) so can't wait to see what else happens.
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this
its like im re-watching the finale in my head (but zuko and katara together, which makes it perfect)
its like im re-watching the finale in my head (but zuko and katara together, which makes it perfect)
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July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Awesome! Truly awesome. Hopefully there will be a continuation. I can't wait. And, it might just be me... but Katara seems like she doesn't love Zuko. I know that could be purposeful, but i would break my Zutarian heart if they didn't end up together. But you are the author so i guess the future is under your control. Hehe, but still great story!
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July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update PLEASE!!! I"m kinda sad whenever I read slow heat because I know what your gonna make happen to her. Well a least your going to make a good version where zuko and katara are together right?
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must admit, this is so much better than any other fan fiction I have read, and I've read a lot on this site. But your work is the first one I have ever reviewed, it is just that damn good. Your ability to paint a image is most impressive. Personally I feel the sparks that Katara and Zuko have as well as Aang's jealousy and anger. I look forward to reading the rest of your story. When will the next chapters be uploaded?
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOOO!!! That IS drama! lol my favorite line has to be:
I quickly shit another fireball at the ground in front of him.
LMAO AANG SHIT OUT A FIREBALL IN FRONT OF ZUKO?! LMAO I couldnt help but get a mental picture of that lol. Man this story is great keep it up. I'm glad you got hit with inspiration..please finish asap! The sooner you finish slow heat the sooner I'll finish reading it lol
I quickly shit another fireball at the ground in front of him.
LMAO AANG SHIT OUT A FIREBALL IN FRONT OF ZUKO?! LMAO I couldnt help but get a mental picture of that lol. Man this story is great keep it up. I'm glad you got hit with inspiration..please finish asap! The sooner you finish slow heat the sooner I'll finish reading it lol
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey i'd be more than happy to beta Slow Heat for you ^_^ noooo problemo ^_^
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was great. i was wondering how it would come about that the rest of the gang would find out...
i hate the idea of the stories ending, but i know it is necessary. i have enjoyed them so much to this point and can't thank you enough for sharing your talent.
as for retouching/editing the stories, i think that would be totally kewl! a piece of art is meant to change and evolve as long as it can, for all i'm concerned ;) but i do ask when you do update in such a fashion, to please mention the chapter/s you've reworked ;)
thanks again!
i hate the idea of the stories ending, but i know it is necessary. i have enjoyed them so much to this point and can't thank you enough for sharing your talent.
as for retouching/editing the stories, i think that would be totally kewl! a piece of art is meant to change and evolve as long as it can, for all i'm concerned ;) but i do ask when you do update in such a fashion, to please mention the chapter/s you've reworked ;)
thanks again!