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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story... Please! Please! make more
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is just as amazing as Feel it! You have such a wonderful knack for bringing out the hidden qualities of the Avatar gang, and using them to craft an incredible story with characterizations that are so dead on, you would think this was written by the series creators! Amazing job, perfect in fact!
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the plot. The You really seem to know what the characters 'would' do, if this situation presented itself. I just wish that you would write a third chapter, or a sequel. I usually like to read PWP's but this story was so intriguing that I just couldn't put it down, so to speek. You've got real talent.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is the best avatar based fiction story that i have read. You did a great job portraying the characters and creating a great plot while at the same time making great love scenes. I hope you get the next chapter soon... I'm dying to learn what's next.
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When r u gonna write more?
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As good as ever!
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are truly amazing. I'm very happy to see you're still around and providing your high quality writing. I think Tokka is just plain cool, and you do a great job of making them seem believable and in character. Really looking forward to future chapters.
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was, to put it simply, amazing. Please continue this story, it is the perfect ancedote for an avatar deprived person.
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far. Keep up the good work, and keep the story coming.
Your fan in the shadows,
Blackash Kitsune
Your fan in the shadows,
Blackash Kitsune
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story it has a very good plot. I think your doing a wonderful job. Keep up the good work.