rate_review Reviews

Thankyou for the update! but....as a child would say, I WANT Sommmore! As always, your writing is freaking awesome.

This is one of the best if not already the best story out there.

Sweet Tokka moment, it's nice for them to keep things light form time to time. I enjoyed Aang's thoughts about his blooming sexuality and Katara's feelings of guilt. In her case it's realistic in view of her culture as seen on the show, and adds to her depth as a character in your story. The best part in this chapter if you ask me is the way you're explaining June's personality, and her dominating streak. Most writers would have left to her being unidimentional, but you show her as a complex woman with a dark past. Anyone can write smut, few can write something that goes further into the charaters' motivations while keeping it interesting. Take your time to write, as far as I'm concerned your work is worth the wait.
Diego

Keep going! THis is funny and great. Best Avatar I have read. Keep it coming please!?

So good to see your back.

Wow. My heart's pounding. Whether it's because of the sex, what Katara's doing, or wondering what EXACTLY that drug is doing to Katara (other than making her horny), I dunno... I started reading this MONTHS AND MONTHS ago, but... well, I finished the three chapters and I really hate when people just stop their stories at the worst possible place. I'm glad that you finally started back up again! I'll be checking for more chapters!

Wonderful story, your a talented writer. You really know how to keep the charaters in character. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Well I would guess if I didn't reply to your story after you posting this chapter in response to my comment would be rude? *grin*

Your writing is just as good as ever. The villains (as I see their 'hosts' at the moment) are slowly revealing their plans to the viewers rather then stating them abruptly, which is a mistake too many authors do. They are subtle people and you write them as such very well.

I won't say I wasn't disappointed at the minimal amount of Toph and Sokka, but I can understand the need to balance screentime amongst the characters. I do hope to see more of them in the next chapter though.

Overall my favorite scene from the story was *I’m like some kind of bold explorer in treacherous territory. Yes sir.* ... that quote was SO Sokka all over. I wonder though, since you mentioned pregnancy, with her whole vibration-sight thing couldn't Toph detect pregnancy pretty easily? The fact that she can detect things as subtle as a heartbeat and quickening of breath (such as when she detects lies) leads me to believe she would be able to detect a pregnancy pretty early on. Of course I don't see that being a problem for our young couple anytime soon, Toph is quite a bit too young to bear children (at least bear them safely). Now detecting someone else's pregnancy might be an interesting proposition, especially if she isn't quite sure what she's detecting, just that the person resonates /different/.

My least favorite scene was the scene between Zuko and June. I just didn't think the scene clicked as well as your other intimate scenes (including your first Zuko/June scene). I also see you portraying Zuko as far more naive then he really should be, but thats just my personal opinion (and is in line with how you've portayed him in the past). Maybe I give them too much credit, but I don't think any of the characters (short of Toph) should really be that naive about sex at their age and with their upbringing. I'm just ranting at this point though so don't mind me.

Overall a very pleasing update that gives us just the right amount of dirtiness with some plot movement. A bit too much banished Prince and not quite enough Toph for my taste, but after all everyones taste differs. I look forward to your next update with baited breath my friend *bows*. You have successfully addicted me to your stories, I hope you're proud of yourself.

Until next time!

Yes! Freaking Uke Zuko!

HAH! I LOVE it!

Oh, I do so enjoy your writing.

Yeah that was beautiful baby.