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You should totally continue this! Plz hurry, I wanna see what happens with Aang and katara!

please continue this fic. it is interesting so far.

Wow, your stories are virtually perfect, plot, characters and the way you write the love scenes, you seem to capture something that eludes most writers, telling it equally well from the perspectives of both Sokka and Toph, I guess I don't quite know how to describe it, let alone write it, but it certainly works. :)

So Won and Kae, are the last of their kind and need an injection of new blood, they are obsessed with racial purity and they are partly descended from the Southern water tribe, I wonder what they are going to do about that then?.

Since chapter3 of "Feel it" I have been wondering if June will catch up with Sokka, and what she might do if she does, but now shes got something else to play with, who knows.

Yo Gunwild
Excellent work! You really know this show well, your character developments are effective and most importantly in the same style as the series.
But I really want to know how it ends!
So if you need someone to edit/spellcheck you work I can do that.
Anything to actually get you to finish this!

My only request is that you please continue. it has been a long length of time, and the show has been on for more than a few weeks, though they're taking a 2 month break.
I really enjoy your writing, and I incorporate some of your masterful work's inspiration in my own serious non-adult writing.

As a person who will soon be published, I believe that you could publish your own original work, erotic or otherwise. If I make it big, you just email me and I'll see I can do to help you get into the biz. Rock on!

p.s. I'd really like you're next chapter!!!

I have to say you continue to capture the characters perfectly and make the sex feel natural and not obscene even when it is the Zuko/June dominating bit. Your talent is amazing and you should keep it up.

Excellently done. Please continue your efforts.

I really like the way you portray everyone and everything in your stories, especially in Feel It! I look forward to seeing your next chapters equally as much as I do the next episode of Avatar. Curious, though, does this take place before or after Kitara learned how to bloodbend? I can't remember right off, but when she figured out she was poisoned I figured she would have tried to isolate it from within and get it out...somehow. I'm not entirely certain how waterbending works when its used on the water (and water-based things, like I'd assume the poison to be).

Wonderful. Which is sorta' a creepy thing to say dude to dude about a fanfiction explicitly drenched in underaged sex... but, you know, wonderful. The writing style is above the usual quality for adult fanfiction, which isn't saying much, I guess? Not to slight other writers or anything, but I guess when the subject matter is aimed at the tween age group you can't really expect super duper quality in fandom? Whatever. Anyway, big fan of the Toph/Sokka stuff- mostly because of the personalities of the characters. I mean, Katara and Aang seem so vanilla to me while Zuko and June just feel (I should get a thesaurus) creepy. Toph and Sokka feel almost believable, especially with the in-character writing and involved story.

While I'll be looking forward to updates on this, I'm also looking for updates to Stranded. Either or, as far as I'm concerned. Keep up the fine work, yeah?

Update as soon as you can, I waited pretty long for this one so hurry soon! More Toph and Sokka while your at it!