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omg that was priceless :)
toph just seemed so inocent hehe
good job

This is a great story, and much more well-written than I'd ever expected to find on this site. Thanks for spending time on /co/, so I could discover your work. Something in your last author's note worried me, though: "It is SO much easier to write about a show when it’s on the air to inspire you..."
Now that the show has ended, will you still be finishing up this story? I'd like to see it have a nice conclusion, especially because it involves my favorite character getting what she wants.

I can't really criticize anything, having little experience reading this type of story (and none at all writing it), but I'd like to say that you've handled the age differences very well, up to and including that they both acknowledge it. It's far too easy to imagine a scenario where a man takes advantage of a young girl's inexperience, and you completely avoided that route.

Hey...still no update. I understand if you don't want to write it anymore, but please upload something stating that.

Damn, that was a good read.

am so stoned rigt now but its a ggood story.

Holy crap, I can't believe that there's a story this good out there that I didn't know about.

great story.

love this story!!! one of my favs! plz update!!!!!

Hot damn this is good.

This piece of fanfiction is a perfect blend of story, character, and sex with one never over shadowing the other. Seriously if this site only had more authors like you.