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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written, to the point where I'm actually interested in the story and not the smut. Oh and props to you for making their sex realistic, as opposed to being horny bunnies/sexgods in one go.
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Can't wait fot the next chapter looks like its going to be a good one...
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jun masturbating... mm, that was hot.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Another Toph story. Very good so far, hope you keep up the great writing.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are defiantly one of my favorite authors now.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying the story just like the other one. I just wish you'd give Irun *Iroh and Jun* a chance ^_^ Please? For a fan? ;)
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, now thats what I call a sequel.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going i like the story line, it seems pretty good, your work didn't suffer at all.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it, please bring on the next chapter