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for In Bai Shan

by Gunwild

person Juxtaposie
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear lord, how excited was I to find that you'd written another fic? And it's Tokka too! Your talent never ceases to amaze me. I cannot WAIT for the second chapter!
person chu chu
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is now my favroite story on this site seriously. I wish it would go on forever.
person chiller7
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Words cant express just how much I love your work.
person jett
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic! Toph and Sokka just go so well together for some reason (Or I'm just a strange pervert.) You really ought to continue and soon. I'm dying of anticipation!!
person tophfan101
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome writting as always! I can't wait for more!
person TheDarkOne
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read your fic again and I must say you have captured each character how they should be. I'm trying to get pointers on Jun ^_^ *I'm so happy she's in your story* I'm helplessly addicted to your work and I hope you write more soon
person tip
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice can't wait to see what happens next time.
person bait you in
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, this kind of writing is of professional caliber. You have a lot of talent you know.
person Skillz
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. A little creepy, but very nice. Also, I notice they had an orgasm pretty fast. Not complaining, but it seemed fast.
person rattle
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice.