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for In Bai Shan

by Gunwild

person TheDarkOne
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. Ooooo I hope more comes soon!
person D4rK
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! ill been waiting for this for weeks, but i think that maybe toph and sokka cant have action in there now, waiting for next update pls soon, see ya
person rolair
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great work haven't seen one tokka fic as good as yours anywere. Oh I know this is gonna sound really stupid but are you male or female you can normaly tell with authors on this site because they obviouly know one body better or are more biased to describing sex in one way or another. You seem to know both bodies very well but I think you are a male because of the Azula team threesome fic but im not 100% sure. Adding on to this long pointless review thanks for putting plot into your story and not pure smut it makes it much more enjoyable. Hope you update your story soon i'll be waiting for the next update but of course no pressure.
person bait and you in
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, your back and better than ever.
person corncurlz
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the nxt chapter.
person 0.o
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is great. I've always been a Tokka fan, but your next chapter interests me much more. You're a great writer and Kataang is my favorite pairing, but all Kataang smut is usually crap. I cant wait to read yours, you've written everything else so well. So update already.

PS, in 'Feel It', that part about Katara masturbating... yeah. Uber-hotness.

PPS, 'Bai Shan' is an actual city, but I'm sure you knew that already, right? ;)
person D4rK
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic there isnt no enought tokka around here, but u my friend r doing a great fucking job, pls update soon i want to u know what could happen in here 'til next update see ya
person Ana
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far!

Just update already!!!!
person Shard
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, I just love it and can't wait to read more.
person Al
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How can you not have updated something this good yet!