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for In Bai Shan

by Gunwild

person Wolfe258
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This really deserves an update
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. Wonder what those two sneaky benders are up to. While I have a pretty good idea I would like to see if you can produce a twist that renders it faulty :)
person Thomas
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Been re-reading your stories lately, didn't even notice this had been updated lol. Glad to see it is going along still, slow though it be. Hope to see more soon.
person Jayrich
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really an outstanding story. Sokka & Toph's relationship shines brightly in this one, though Zuko's demeanor/attitude kinda shied me away at first.

I hope you continue this...
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought you gave up on this story.
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
god I love this story.
person hugetits92007
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome story!!!! can't wait to read more!!!
person Hands of stone
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More! Now, dammit! lol

Never enough when it comes to your writing, GW. Keep it up! Err...
person SW
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know what I find boring? PWP. You know what I love? Your writing. Honest to Koh, you've got such a great handle on the characters, and the emotions, and the pacing, and the hot sexy scenes are just the icing on the cake! Just the sort of thing I always hope to find on AFF. Please write more!