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for The Ghost-Boy Chronicles

by Jayrich

person Revan
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I take it your a fan of DarkDP's work. Lot of the story seems to pay tribute to his artwork.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"leaving a long, thin line of saliva between them."

-truthfully, that is not sexy at all. nice chapter, though!
person Bishonen
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that was good hope it wasnt the end and I wished you had talked a bit more about the orgy oh well

With Love;Imasuky Lomae
person RAW19
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this fic is so perfect. that last line was funny as heck! this is really in tune with the show too, and i love that! i hope you update soon!
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea. Please put the orgy in your next chapter!
person RAW19
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh..my..god. wow! this story is excellent and i can not find a single flaw with it. i sat here and read the entire thing at once. you are a truly talented author, my friend!
person Bishonen
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when you would add a chpater to this one that was great i cant wait to see what happens next

With love Imasuky Lomae
person Bishonen
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty intresting hope for some more soon

With love;Imasuky Lomae
person LoneWolf23k
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh.. I'm loving this series so far. I can only hope Sam gets some action with Danny next episode. She sounds like she seriously needs it.
person Bishonen
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay that was really good but the thig about super birth control pill incase his father got pregnet was just plain scary hope you update agin soon

With Love; Imasuky Lomae