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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay you are getting a review from me. I know hold the applause until I'm done. I love this I like how it all is coming together and I love Toph and Sokka MOST IMPORTANLY Katara and Zuko you keep it just like you got it. AWESOME. Okay now applaud
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Who else but the Avatar could get what Jebo wants. I am thinking that Tage is somehow related to him possibly his brother or something. I love a mystery and how this is all coming together. Please do not hurt Toph anymore please!!!! I love the Zuko and Katara stuff at the end Beautiful and simple Perfect. Tage is creepy if he is watching him
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Here you are!!!! I am impressed and hooked. I love how this is all tied together and not all those story lines with in a story running all over the place. I CAN NOT wait for the next installment!! This is fanstatic in my book SyJen.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude hurry up and update will ya. I am liking this more and more. I like the impending fight with Pakka and the impending uneasiness with Zuko wanting Katara but it is wrong! LOVE it keep it coming. You are doing GREAT
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! I would stop there but I can't. LOve the mystery and romance feel with some danger stuff in it. You know how to write so keep it going. Zuko and Katara was Perfection!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay whatever you do next I'm all for it:) This is excellent I have to say I like how the two separate situations team Avater are in look like they will come together. Keep it flowing!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME. I see Zuko's winning personality is coming out in this case that is a good thing . you know put Tage on notice this is MINE! LOVE it MORE!!!!!
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff Like the story Update soon
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I see that Zuko does not like the healer already not because of his wife, I mean Katara or nothing. Great story i need more!