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for Enemy Mine

by Summersand

person Myliana
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is Awesome! You are a marvelous writer. Your imagination stuns me. This story is so unique and excellent. I am hooked, addicted to it. Please give me more of my drug.
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMn he alsmost gave in. That would be wrong of him but he has MUCH honor. This was spectacular!. I love it.
person wydow
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As always with you perfection. Please do not let Toph get injured furtherand let Zuko's honor win. I kind of like him with the honor but I do like the sizzling stuff and his reactions. Okay I am torn
person RedWine
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You tease. I can not tell you how much I love this story. It is unique and Sizzling with hottnes.LOL I await your next update.
person Scorpinac
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Huh, Could have sworn I'd reviewed this previously... oh, well.

Okay, Zuko's managing to restrain himself, barely, and Jebo is an absolute bastard. Nice to know. Come on Momo, untie her so she can warn her airboyfriend! And if Katara could just get her memory back, preferably before she and Zuko do something they'll both regret... More, please!!! Laters.
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Toph escapes that nasty bastard Jebo. You can't hurt Toph come on! DUDE...Zuko and Katara.... you got me sweatin' love this MORE!
person Kasson G
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read all seven chapters and I have to say Now you've gone and done it.

You made me crave for more. I love how you write and I love your story. It is unique and beautiful.

I will stop now before I write a novel about how much I want you to update ASAP. Kasson G
person lil'bit
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect......More please
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a piece of work Jebo is picking on Toph, But I am sure she will have her revenge.I hope so! Lets just say Zuko and Katara. Sizzle!!!!!! Awesome NEXT!
person Lillybugs
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Trully Amazing story....Please continue immediately or within the next hour.