rate_review Reviews

I gotta let you know ....I loved it!! just getting better and better!

Wow...wonderful story! If only it wasn't fanfiction, it could truly be its own book. (I wonder if the frequent updates won me over.....)

Nasty. I can see four women (Ty Lee, Mai, Azula - you sick bastard, and Katara) at the local maternity ward all sporting swollen bellies. You have made him such a man slut. He's mine, damnit! Stop letting those wenches have a test ride with his manliness. Otherwise great story. Can he start knocking up all his adoring fan girls, too? Can he, can he. Probably not, since he is so must sexier and better than any Avatar character. However, he can start with my local chapter!

damn that was good! better than ben and jerrys @ 2pm ;>

this story scares me... you should probably know i like being scared. this is so hot.

damn this is a great saga!!! so does katara get a turn?

I must say, this is a marvelous piece of work you have here. Your ability to update so quickly is amazing, especially considering the quality of them. I love how you've produced a background and history for everything, whereas most other fics don't say a word about it. Fantastic job overall, I can't wait to see how it will turn out.

I love how fast you update!!! great job!! keep going

I have just spent the last hour or so reading this non stop... and i have to say, this story is brillent (unlike my spelling ablity), the depth of the plot and of the characters is amazing... *bows to your greatness*
you give life to the possable histories of the show and characters, that could very well be cannon... (well if the show was geared of a more mature viewer. that is. ;o)
and you have the "voices" just right... your Zuko is perfect... :O)

I have to say i'm a little worried about when Katara finds out Jian Li is really Zuko, but it'll make for very good reading. ;o) Katara and Zuko are so Red string soulmates!!! (Zatura Forever... sorry couldn't resist. ;O)

awesome job, and i look forward to reading lots more
of this story.

Later,
TrinityLayne

You are a machine!!! This is marvelous. You are a great writer!!!!!