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Amazing. I started reading this at 5:30 this evening and have just now finished (11:53). I couldn't stop... It was like a disease, albiet a good one! Zuko... GAH. And I loved your take on Azula. Who knows? She might just want to be loved (but I doubt it). The way you wrote all of these characters was so emotionally inspiring that I could feel for every one of them. Wonderful fic. It's one of the best I've ever read. I will definetly check up on your other fics. Keep writing!

Nice story well written a little thin on the porn but this story is shaped to be action and it does it well. Lovee the idea of Zuko getting 4 women pregnant though shuddered in horror on the Azula bit. Liked how you threw in chinese words in with their translation right by instead of at the bottom makes the story easier.My one complaint is the Lung problem One If Zuko had bad lungs like that it wouldn't kil him or speed up his dettriation but rather make Breathing control A LOT harder but it can't affect the lungs like that only something in our lungs could do that like a peice of bone or hard muccus. Two the more logical thing for your description of his lungs is trubucolis I belive is how its spelled anyhow It fills the lungs with Muccus which when blood starts to appear is because the Muccus has harden and is stabbing the lungs slowly ripping them apart with each breath that would fit in a lot better. three if you have lung problems as a kid but they go away they can't come back years later its just not possible espically if its a physical formantion problem I know because my strenum is dented inwards and use to give me problems breathing but now it doesn't and can't harm me. four Physical act such as Firebending and Swordplay would help Zuko's health since all the motion helps break up muccus and prevent it from getting to big to cause damage. Beyond the Health problem and a lack of Sokka/Suki since you did pair them at the end its a very good story. Also I am aware my spelling sucks.

:D Is this going to continue? Or has it been completed. It's nice to see this incarnation of those characters find a (relatively) peaceful end. :) Excellent work!

Loving the sequel-ness. So.... is Li Ling going to be the reincarnate of Zuko or is this the end for quite a marvelous story? How did Lady Azula become Seer though...side affect of blindness? And props to all of the little airbenders! A truly good story, proper mix of violence, action, plot, ect. truly well done, waiting for more.......

You made me cry. Damn, you are good! Can't wait to see what up comming next from your twisted mind.

The whole series what just fantastic!!! Your story was woven so well. Just lovely

O_O Wow. This story is intensly depressing, though deliciously twisted. Zuko's sired 4 kids...busy guy. I can't see how this could ever end happily...I severely doubt it will. Good story though. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter (read: dying to find out what's gonna happen next).

just three words, damn you're good.

good chapter! I must say Zuko is very fertile!

Thank you for delivering one of the most interesting erotic stories I read on AFF.net. You have a prince who hurts the one he loves so that she would be safe and then you have his evil, twisted sister fall in lust with his alter ego. Kissing the whip and using the belt buckle. You have given us all a wonderful tale.

I am upset that I don't have a fraction of the talents you have. You have created such a wonderful piece that I wish that a great artist turned your story into a graphic novel or better yet an anime! You have put together the version of the avatar that should have been put on Adult Swim or on it's own DVD. (Yes, I know that Adult Swim is not Nick)

Everyone else better start writting more reviews or the author might pack up and take the storys with him, never to be seen again!