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for Chuckie's Last Straw

by Jayrich

person deruam
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello it's been a while sence I review a story has it?First a anothere wonderful chapter.And second you do like to put them into dangers stiches.I ageer with skyhammer on been caught by one parent soon or later.But it is fun to read how they get out of it.
person Bishonen
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for takeing so long to review well anyways this was great hope for more soon.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
person deruam
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the second story i read form you.I really in joy your story keep going on.Right now i'm going on to the next story you have.
person flyer23
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really hardlly watch the show.But this story you want to.I wander if a anothere girl was intress an chuckie,how would angelica feel.She already hurt a boy for messy with him an front of the school.
person Bishonen
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took so long to review this new chapter but i'm glad that i found it this was awesome just wish there was some yuri

With Love; Imasuky Lomae
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It started off SOO well!
Whats up with all the 3rd chapter wrongness and the pimping?!
Darn that guy pretending to be Phill!
person Bishonen
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Been a while since I looked this over good chapter hope on update is soon

With Love;Imasuky Lomae
person maverick
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a real good story I would really like to see a story bloom from it.
person cotoye
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First time reader,an joy it. PLEASE DO MORE!!
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pls write another chapter