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for Payback, Courtesy of Jack Spicer

by Jayrich

person D4rK
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At last some "heterosexual" fic to our enjoyment about time...; theres only like 4 or 5 non-gay fics
person Gunwild
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was surprised by how much I enjoyed reading this. While your descriptions are unwieldy, the dialogue is often genuinely funny. Like something you'd see on the show, actually. I didn't find it so much hot as hilarious, since the jokes and story took up far more space than the sex. Anyway, I liked it and could stand to see more, for sure. 'Cause I need to hear how confused Omi will be by the mechanics of actual nastification.
person red
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally! a decent non-gay Xiaolin Showdown fic. Are these three chapters the entire story? Because i would love to see Jack get payback for his defeat via kimiko.