rate_review Reviews

... you didn't have a climax... again... you are SO mean... but at least now you know that some people do dig on the tentacoo wape.

While Katara doesn't talk that way, especially in mid-molestation, you seem to have a knack for keeping one aware of what's going on. That's impressive, given that most of us can't even write firmly about where everybody's genitals are supposed to be at a given time. But I get the feeling that she won't have her mouth free for a lot of this story... hee. Update soon. Have longer chapters. You have succeeded in making the reader want some more. In summation, you get a gold star!

Cthulu fthagn, and all that. Peace out.

Oh my...that was really erotic...even though these types of manga's are weird to me, I'm glad you don't make it like Katara totally hates the sex. All the tentacle manga's I've seen the girls seemed like that, though I think there are few where they show them enjoying it.......continue soon...please...?????

Avatar and tentacle sex? Who knew? Well, it is quite good. Katara's reactions were believable and correct for her character, and the fact that it is well written is a definite plus! I am very interested to see where this goes, and what happens throughout the upcoming chapters!

Yay, tentacoo wape! That was good, though I'm upset you didn't get all the way at least once in the first chapter. Next time though, right? I'll look forward to it.

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I´m confused....

You end there!?!?...*dies*

OMG! A Multi-chapter tenticle story! I love it! More! More! More! Pretty please ;)