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for In the Forest

by AloofandAndrogynous

person Anon
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like that idea where Toph comes and gets snatched, as well....
person Wow!
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd never thought I'd say this, but this is the best tentacle sex story ever! You're a great writer, keep it up!
person PikaBot
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Look, not to be hating or anything, but you need to work on your word usage. It seems like a paragraph isn't complete without Katara 'whimpering softly', or hearing a 'soft rustling'. A bit more variety would improve the story a good deal.
person Omnipotent One B
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so love tentacle sex. I love yaoi to. Meow. Citrus cum.... Ah if only it were really that way.
person Jhondie
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This stuff is so frikking HOT!!!
person Pyr00tje
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that's steaming hot m8.. continue :)
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, are we actually gonna see this thing, or what? Alas poor Katara, but it could be worse, I suppose. And lord knows what would happen if Toph came looking, or Azula and her two buds came along...oops, did I just give you a dirty idea or two... Laters
person lotusamurai
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh I don't think this is that sick. I like this kind of stuff though so hey, what are you gonna do eh? (Stupid cliffhangers)
person A. Lias
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
X3 Mwahaha! Beautiful, truly beautiful. I look forward to more!
person Makyura
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is disgusting. Some of your other stories were interesting. However, this story takes things too far. The thought of such a horrible idea sickens me to my core.