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for In the Forest

by AloofandAndrogynous

person Panther Eyes
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a forest spirit... interesting. whats gonna happen now???
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So is the creature going to keep her?
person Spleef
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unbelievably hot. Who thought that tentacles could be so... sexy?
person R
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gods! I nearly puked!
person Tentacle Lover
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nothing short of H O T!

Write more plz!
person Ebil
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE! YAY! X3 Surpriiiiiise buttsecks!
*Latches to you* I love you like 10324834897 times more now. Good work! Me luffs!
person Scorpinac
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, and for chapter 5 we finally get to see this thing/guy. Why, oh why, do I sense the word "Shikima" coming up...? Well, laters!
person Omnipotent One B
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“so she had nothing to try to scare the tentacle away with, to her dismay” I love this part, I died laughing. Bad mental image, but I love the story.

Please don’t hate me but, “Just how many were thee?” There?? sorry it's rare I find a mistake in your stuff, so i'm not sure..... (hides!!)

Still...... CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!! Why!!!!???!!!! hehehe, awesomeness... So where's the next chapter?
person Panther Eyes
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHO IS IT?????????? IS IT SOME1 WE KNOWOR A CHARACTER U MADE UP???????? HURRY UP N UPDATE!
person Anon
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, well, she(Toph) was mentioned briefly in chap. 2(part of Katara's mental ponderings), and it just sort of made me think, "You know...". Frankly, though, I'd still like to "see" this thing fully. But apparently it's a coward... Oh, well. Laters.