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for In the Forest

by AloofandAndrogynous

person Mermaid Ninja
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aang and Sokka must be worried sick!!
person Panther Eyes
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww... katara now has her own little family. but if shes gonna have more of kamis offspring shouldnt they have names? i have not been pregnant yet n i still cant imagine what its like 2 have another human been inside of u. from what i hear its a wonderful feeling. n giving birth is a pain but its worth it in the end.
person mokoshna
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tentacles X Young heroine is LOVE (and the sign that I watched too much of those for my own good).
Hooray for the cliché hentai multiple-loving thingie for the horny girl who takes them all and loves it!
person habsrule44
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a story, everything I could hope for with katara. easily the best avatar story i've ever read. I just hope that there are more chapters to come.
person David
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love the story. Though i do not like Avatar the last air bender, i gotta admit, this story has deepness, beauty (i dont know any other words to say im not a sissy!) it has great story. Everything is explained in detail. And has a hint of mystery oh what to come next. i seriously expect another chapter. Are you gonna make another chapter? well then CHOP CHOP! :P
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, really, really, really hope that this is not the end. Maybe have Katara bear some offspring? That'd be cool to see.
person Pyr00tje
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would laugh my ass off if the "kami" turns out to be Aang :D
person Scorpinac
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Broke her, huh? Well, I guess that's not too much of a surprise. But I'd still like to see the others suddenly come rushing back in for the rescue! Well, we'll see what you decide to do. Laters.
person Panther Eyes
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
katara actually accepted being kamis mate. great sex sense by the way. im still wondering what the chances r that aang n other will come 4 her?
person Emjee
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far! I look forward to reading the rest. Very well written all-around, I appreciate the effort you put into the basics so many people seem to miss (i.e., punctuation, grammar, paragraphs, and so on).