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January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Darn, I was hoping to read the rest of it before you decided to revamp it. Please hurry and do it soon. I'd liked to read the revised version.
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September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Am I missing something, or is there only one chapter to this?
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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'll be completely honest. The only reason I read this to begin with was because of the word "tentacles". I'm not personally a fan of Katara, and I'm far more likely to read yaoi (even yuri) than I am to reading anything hetero. But I'm glad I read this one =D I was actually browsing through your stories because I adore how smoothly you write, and how vivid your style is, and I thought "what the heck? why not?" I was surprised at how it all came together in the story. I was honestly expecting the usual "raping-object finishes with girl and goes away to leave her to attend to her 'wounds' and think of a way to explain to her companions what happened" but I was pleasantly surprised at how elaborate you got with the Kami. This was a fantastic story, and I also loved how the offspring also wanted to show his mother 'love' as well, without all the standard incest-taboos that seem to show up a lot. I look forward to reading more amazing things from you, as well as giving all the other hetero stories of yours I've passed over a chance. =3
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, katara has a baby!!! pleaz update!!! this story is SO HOT!! UPDATE PLEAZ!!
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The best story ive read so far! When are you going to update? It seems like it has been a while since this was updated, keep it going!!!!
PS. katara's baby birth scene is soooo sexy, can you write more detailed(hmm) chapters of her giving birth? Thanx!!!! ;D
PS. katara's baby birth scene is soooo sexy, can you write more detailed(hmm) chapters of her giving birth? Thanx!!!! ;D
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!!!! WHEN WILL U UPDATE!???! PLEAZ!!!
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April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Pretty good writing but I wish Katara would have eventually escaped.
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story; well thought out and inventive. Great descriptions and a good storyline :)
As fun as the storyline confined to Katara has been I've love to see you do more with this, perhaps the offspring (which does, I think, need a name) could decide it wants Toph or one of the other beauties of the Avatar world (Suki, Azula, Mai, Ty Lee) as its mate?
As fun as the storyline confined to Katara has been I've love to see you do more with this, perhaps the offspring (which does, I think, need a name) could decide it wants Toph or one of the other beauties of the Avatar world (Suki, Azula, Mai, Ty Lee) as its mate?
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really a big fan of tentacles but I loved this story. To bad in the end she forgot about her friends. I was half expecting her son to mate with one of her friends and then lead to a family orgy xDDD
Nice work! ^^
Nice work! ^^
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude u should win an award for "Best Smut Ever Written"