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for Fortieth Birthday Surprise

by Bonniefan

schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice one gotta say I was kinda thinking it would be funny if Ron did find out and very classic teenage boy reaction I must say. Great work on this one glad I finally got to read it.
person Jarkota
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Niiiiiiice. Now that the bug with my account that's kept me from reviewing seems to be fixed, I can return the favor.

I absolutely adored this fic. You see so fiew involving Kim's parents that *don't* have Anne sleeping with Ron or James having an affair with Monique that it's worth a read just to see soemthign decent. Well, this is beyond decent. I would go sof ar as to say that this is one of the better fics on the site, and one last addition (like a final 'farewell' between Vivian and Anne and James) would do nicely to wrap it all up. Keep up the good work, man.
person felipe fontecilla
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW
person frank
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow
person RonMan
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And here I thought Daddy P was going to get a Kimmie ride. Guess she's saving it for me :)
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All hail the Canadian Smufflord! HUZZAH! Nice job, you smuffy buggar! Hot, like fire! ;)

THANKS!
person ronnie
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FUNNY AS HELL!!!No kid would like too see that.
person Big Mike
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just... wow... That was... very descriptive. I liked the ending with Kim and Ron coming into the house. That was so Ron to say "Way to go!" Now Kimmie's going to have to use some brain soap! My question is... Why did Ron want to stay?
person RI100014
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even after your attempt on my life (Plot Bunny 12-gauge, pump-action shotgun remember?:P) I still will leave you a review. I have to say that was great. I love it that James and Mrs. Possible have such trust in their marriage that something like this only strengths their relationship instead of hurting it.
Oh and having Ron catch on to what was happening before Kim was hilarious, especially his rather (IMO) randy smile that broke out across his face. "MrDrP you are the man!" LOL LOL. Poor Kimmie. She'll never look at her parents the same way again...hehehe.

Till next time...adios.
person SM
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a really nice ending.