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May 15, 2020 at 12:00 AM
Firstly let me say that I really enjoyed this story! I loved how it developed the whole way through!
That being I am not the type to blow smoke up anyone's behind. So prepare yourself for my next paragraph!
Your writing is atrocious! Your grammar is some of the worst I have ever seen! No joke!
You have a good mind for writing all your need is the education to go along with it and you could become a great writer. Please seek out that education and become the phenomenal writer I you can be!
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story hope you write more about the weekenders. :)
Sabbs
Sabbs
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yea, like the third time i've read this.
a good story, very good.
And, the sequel, could you finnish it please?
a good story, very good.
And, the sequel, could you finnish it please?
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great work! Picking the Weekenders as your story subjects was the best thing here...thanks. Keep up the great work . Hope to see more of your writings. :)
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You, Sir, are one of the greatest writers of whom I have had the immense pleasure of reading stories. I feel like this story could grow much more. I greatly look forward to reading more of your stories.
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice..how about in the next one the girls relise they love each otehr as much as they both love Tino? Could be very intresting*wink*
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great stories man i hope you write the sequal to this.
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I approve. Not too much weekenders stuff here. Moar, please.
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story please update
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, don't see too much weekenders stuff. Lemme know when you update please. Fry_Company@yahoo.com