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for The Dark Ocean

by Rann

person Mags
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter held a lot of insight and has me dying to know what happens next. I'm sure Dr. Director is very surprised at Kim's use of her name and she should be. I loved the back story between Dr. Director and Punk. I hope it gives Kin the insight she needs about everything between her and Shego. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please come back as soon as you can.
person Silversnowwolf
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow....imean damn. this is a freakin amazing story. I'm in awe of this first chapter. that's really damn hard to do. Being a bookworm i've read over 700 books, stories, audiobooks, and fanfictions, and it's really hard to actually leave me in awe of how great a story is, and having the point that i'm in awe, the very first chapter. I applaud your insane talent in writing this story and i can't wait to read more of it.

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person SilverSnowWolf
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, another amazing aweing chapter. I really hope you update soon man, this is freaking amazing!!!
person Dutchman
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Iteresting how doing the right thing can put one on the wrong side of the law. Anxious to see how this plays out.
person kestin
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fuck yes! You updated!! Damn I hope you update again soon :3 I love this fic, you write so well XD
person obscurebeing
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
read the story, got into the story, enjoyed the story and then it just stopped. i'm warning you now to finish this else i'll set the hounds on you and they will find you and destroy you. Mwahahaha! oh please oh please!!! I've never begged before but you've made me do it. this is one of the best stories on this whole site and you haven't even finished it yet. how dare you. please! i'll do anything! just name your request!

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person fireinu
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far.
person Laura
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD WRITE ANOTHER! That was awesome! I have to know what happens.
person Caffine
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This. Must. Be. Continued!

person That Guy There
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, a story on this website with a plot and emotion. Usually I just periodically come to this website to see what new thing can disgust and\or disturb me, but I really do enjoy coming across the occasional gems. Very nice.