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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! I can't wait to read the next one. One of my favorite fics ever!
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! the fight scene was intense! Cant wait for the next update, i hope pretty soon ^^;
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An unpredictable turn of events, to be sure. In the last chapter I was wondering about whether Kim's turn at supervillainy would begin compromise her morality, but the arrival of GJ's goons, (I think it's more appropriate that liberal use of force be made by criminal adjuncts of the authorities rather than the law-and-order peopel themselves)threw a wrench in that. At first I was a little worried about the plot line itself, for while you had a great grasp of style, prose, et al, I thought it was a little contrived. But the last two chapters have a seen greater empahsis on interpersonal relationships aside from the main actors, and a more complicated conflict. Really quite good, and exciting.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WoW!!! O.O;; this is such an awesome KiGo fic! I hope u update soon ^^*;
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woot, that was getting pretty intense.
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like how your doing things. I have little too no idea what's going to happen next & that's what I love about great fics like this.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful way to include Oracle/Batgirl while not violating any additional copyrights. Also will we be seeing Zarpox or the Killer Bebes? Or perhaps the dreaded shapeshifter herself?
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome start! I am really hooked on this story! Few people write about Dr. Director like she's anything more than a background character and then she is just a hard-faced bitch. Thank you for making her a human and giving her a personality and history. I look forward to more interaction between all characters (with, of course, more Kigo moments and, hopefully, Punk/Dr. Director moments)
Write on!
Write on!
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even without the lemon elements, this is a damn good read and an excellent extrapolation of how Kim could become a supervillain without compromising her basic character. The only quibble I have is with the doctors and security at the hospital having ready access to high caliber weaponry, but otherwise, a well written story. Looking forward to more.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This entire story had captured my interest and is not letting go. I'm amazed by thes spirit of those people in the room with Shego and I can not wait to see what happens as time goes on. The last line for this chapter (as pathetic as it may be) gave me chills (might just be the chill in the room *shrugs*) I'm still so in for the long haul with this story.