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*On Chapter 15*
Bravo, Aridorn; bravo. The only thing that would please me more in this would to be some full-blown lemon scenes and maybe the four of them sharing a little more than just a hideout (but, then again, that better fits my fic than yours). I admit I had reservations about this fic at the beginning, but it's really grown on me and can't wait to see what happens next.

Fantastic story, man. Absolutely fantastic. There are very, very few fics on the 'Net that I actually look forward to updates for, and this is one of them. 5-star rating from me. The relationship between Kim and Shego is beautiful, though I felt pained when reading about Ron and Yori's marriage (but that just comes from me being a fircely loyal Kim/Ron shipper, so pay it no mind; it just means you succeeded in evoking an emotional response). It is rare to find a story with so much actual plot and a believable scenario that I *had* to congratulate you.

Amazing... They just keep getting better and better!

Still my favorite story on AFF. EVER.

Keep up the awesome work!

looks like the new team is off to a decent start ... something kinda bugged Ron at the start, probly not being able to go along as well which is understandable, Kim and Shego got to catch up with Kims parents which worked out nicely and Kim and Shego managed to work past what was probly the most challenging problem their relationship has faced yet ... oh and Bonnie got busted for s-lifting lol that alone made everything else all the better

eagerly awaiting the next installment and some of those 'side stories' you mentioned elsewhere

=^.^=

*Smiles at warm feeling*

Chapter twelve, yea, good.

Oh my god... It just keeps getting better and better!
I just read all three new chapters (10,11,12), maybe faster than I should have, and I can't wait to find-out what happens next!
Keep doing what your doing.

X3 Kim returned! OMG! XD I really want to see Shego going up against Ron or Kim to see if they would be surprised with the new style she aqquired in Mexico or even a scene where Shego and the Jaguar are "playing" and one of the members of her pack see them. I'm also waiting to see how the pack will react when Shego tells them what happened in Mexico.

It would be interesting if Shego mourns slightly again about the deceased Jaguar and Kim asks her what's wrong? X3 TEH JAGUAR!!!

Ja ne,
LF

^^; I'll just take this to the point and say I'm in love with "The Dark Ocean". Seriously. I loved the emotion, the turmoil, the understanding of one's self. And the jaguar. X3 I hope you update soon.

really didn't expect that. 11 was good though, glad to see Shego is here, and feelin bad for "friend kitty" losing her mate. this is going on my reccomended reading list.

Now this is a rare treat. I hardly never, ever review stories, and now you just had to write such a heartgripping, wonderful, moving story that forced me to get an account just so I could tell you how much I love this. And oh, I do so love this. Kim and Shego make such an intriguing and wonderful couple, and with the complications of Shego's animal side, I can only see it getting more interesting. And oooh, a supervillain Kim, the /most/ delicious idea in this story I must say. I hope you won't make her return to being a boring goody two-shoes hero she was, as sweet as she is. Because a supervillain Kim... Please. Begging here. More? I'm truly and well hooked. I love how you decipt the relationships not just between our main two hero... eh, anti-heroes, but also the rest of the 'pack'.

Well, I guess that's that, just wanted to share my love for this piece of excellency with you. I will be stalking here to see when the next part will appear. Oh gods the cliffhanger... I just hope Shego manages to catch Kim and explain it to her before the poor girl completely freaks out.